M14Frodo's Reviews

[Derpcraft]

Fact.

I don't have minecraft, so I will admit that I don't have any form of verifiable opinion; but as far as I can tell. This is 100% fact. Even better: It's animated well; it's funny; and I enjoyed it so much I've watched it three times today. Win.

[Captain Ig'nant]

Good stuff!

A lot of people need to get over being offended so easily apparently. This is obviously a satire with a specific message that's all too true. The truth is that there's no reason why more people within the black community couldn't be doing better if they applied themselves. It's really not even about the color of their skin, it's about the ghetto-culture (which just happens to have a higher percentage of black people). There needs to be more entrepeneurship in the culture and less of a want to make money and do what "feels good" without considering the consequences.

[Chuck vs Alfa]

Awesome

Glad to see stick-animation done right and getting the credit for it! Awesome soundtrack, good animation; and I could easily pick up on the plot without knowing the characters at all!

[Zombie Outbreak]

All but perfect!

The only two criticisms I can really give you is that the area becomes somewhat stagnant; running around in essentially a circle for however long your alive. So perhaps in the future you could make one that scrolls with the character so you can go throughout the entire city? Maybe one where you're attacked in different parts of the city and you have a map in-between waves showing your movement towards a potential safehaven?

The only other criticism isn't that bad at all; the overhead of the trees got in the way at some points. Nothing wrong with that, and it makes for a more diverse gameplay, but it also feels a little cheap when you're taking damage from a direction you can't see.

Other than that you obviously know what you're doing! Graphics were great and the sounds were decent! Can't wait to see a sequel!

dekman responds:

Thank you for your nice review. I need to learn more ActionScript before I can make a game with more screens. I'm working on AS3 right now. Hopefully I'll make a better one. Thanks for playing.

[Zombie Hole]

Good start!

I going to either guess English isn't your first language or you just didn't care about the dialogue's grammar. It's a good game, kind of short but entertaining! I played through the first time using the pistol thinking I was going to conserve my ammo for a later period in the game but it was too short for that later period. I found a good way to conserve shotgun ammo was to shoot one round into a zombie with the shotty and then switch to the pistol for the final blow. It doubled the amount of zombies I could kill with it.

Overall it's a good start for a zombie game, hopefully you'll develope a sequel or another plotline for a zombie game. Perhaps look into a game envolving a government follow-up investigation into the cavern? Perhaps a story of the original zombie break out with swords, pikes, and the like. Again, too short.

Improvements: Obviously make it longer, possibly prioritize checkpoints on the mini-map so they pop up as objectives change or they indicate which one to do first.
Add a reload button for the pistol (possibly the other guns as well).
Add more weapons, or ammo boxes, and improve upon the weapons and the aim. The shotgun handled like a rifle with no spray and general accuracy. Maybe make it fire numerous pellets that spread out, each pellet doing a designated damage amount thus when close it does more damage when more pellets hit but far it does less since they're spread out and are more likely to hit more zombies rather than a specific target?
Add a pause button.

These are just some suggestions that I think could improve any future zombie projects or shooters you create. What you did was good though, and it's a lot more than what I can do so you get a thumbs up and a smile from me. Good job!

[FPA: World 2]

BEST GAME ON NEWGROUNDS!

That I've played anyway, and I mean that!

[Japan Earthquake]

Awesome!

I really can't find anything wrong with this picture, it's really good. It just didn't take my breath away. The shading's perfect though and the rubble definately has a flow.